The time has come again, for me to be amused by my muse 😋;)
This one is inspired by Sarah’s sketch titled Broken Face – you should see the sketch to have a better idea behind my poem.
Please have a look at her blog and her beautiful sketches! 😄💜
They broke my wings,
Left me incapable of flying,
Yet when they desired a display,
They demanded, I should soar high!
They broke my heart,
And let me cry over its pieces,
But when they ordered,
I had to hide those tears inside.
They broke my spirit
Leaving me distraught.
No mercy I expected off them
And they didn’t disappoint.
With every piece of mine that fell,
I crumbled like a damaged figurine.
The only part left of me now, which you behold,
Are the sealed lips, enclosing veiled mysteries of my life.
©S.F.R.
Awww – this is sooooooo amazing!!! 🙂 It breaks my heart just reading it! It´s so wonderful, Syeda! I can´t believe that my little sketch evoked such a spring of piercing words! You are so talented and I´m very proud of you and of calling you my friend!! You absolutely rock!!! 🙂 XOXO
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Thank you so much Sarah. Seems like a long time I wrote a poem, especially one in a collaboration with you. I don’t know how it comes but when I see an image/sketch/picture/photograph, the screws and nails start creaking! You are so kind to me always! 😊
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You´re very welcome, Syeda! Yes, it really was a long time, but I felt that I mustn´t insist on it or push since I don´t have any right to do it anyway 😉 and especially when you were enjoying your holidays! And a creative process such as yours shouldn´t be forced. You should only write, when you feel like it, and I will always be soooo happy if you do!!! It is such a wonderful thing that images inspire you the way they do!!! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Secret Art Expedition and commented:
My dear friend Syeda just posted this awesome poem that she´d written in response to one of my drawings and I´m totally over the moon!!! Please read it, visit her wonderful blog if you haven´t already done so and enjoy the beauty of her words!!!
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This poem evokes such depth of feelings. Well written suffering.
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Thanks for reading and the comment! 🙂
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The only part left of me now, which you behold,
Are the sealed lips, enclosing veiled mysteries of my life. – oohhh nice finisher, good work ☺
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Thanks Lion! 😄
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I love that ending, this is a wonderful and sad poem. Wonderfully written, as always 🙂
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Thanks Meerkat! 🙂
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This is some poetry, Syeda! Such feeling I can discern thru your words!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Very lovely!
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Thank you so much!
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wow, what a way to write about it.
I write about these kinda things too..
I hope you can come read them and maybe give me an advice on crafting beautiful writing pieces that provoke emotions. I hope to be better at writing! 🙂
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