Poetic Side of Me! Leaving Stains Date: July 8, 2016Author: SyedaFR 7 Comments This color crimson, I leave behind as a trail Is my pain flowing, out of the wounds Inflicted by you! The cold outside Is reminiscent of the pain Flowing within me, Spilling out and staining The world around me! ©S.F.R. Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading...
Bringing the sadness and anger with this, every line was well placed and added some depth. Great pic to choose too. ☺ LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thank you Lion! 😄 Tried to do differently by repeating the words with an opposite effect. Thanks to your kind words, seems it wasn’t that bad idea 😄😉 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Awesome! So deep it hurts just reading it… Your words give that picture so much more effect!! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
A dolefu poem 😔… – Cezane
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Yes! The image struck me…
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Bringing the sadness and anger with this, every line was well placed and added some depth. Great pic to choose too. ☺
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Thank you Lion! 😄
Tried to do differently by repeating the words with an opposite effect. Thanks to your kind words, seems it wasn’t that bad idea 😄😉
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Awesome! So deep it hurts just reading it… Your words give that picture so much more effect!!
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Thank you dear! That picture gave me those ideas and words! 😄
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