Sharing with you today, the poem of mine which was published on The Oak Wheel.
Beyond the horizon!
Far across the meadows,
Crossing over fences and brooks
I tread over rock and sand
And desire to cross my threshold.
Looking at those meek birds
Fly high soaring in the sky
I see them rising steadily
Uncaged and breathing in freedom.
The step I plan to take now
Will change the course of my life.
If I stay within the boundaries,
I’ll stay confined, all my life.
I crossed it, aware of the consequences,
Unaware about where it will lead,
I need to see further, widen the scope of my vision,
Reach for the sky and stars, lying beyond the horizon.
©S.F.R.
I get such a beautiful and precise imagery out of this, this poem is so perfect in words, in lines, in beauty, in everything! Nice One! – Cezane
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Wow! Love those words of appreciation. Thanks for such kind words Cezane. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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Aww – so beautiful, as always, Syeda! Fills me with beautiful images and an unknown longing…
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Thanks dear! Glad you liked it! 😄
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Wonderful and congrats on being published also 😀
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Thanks Lion! This was just what I felt like when I decided to go for Kindle publishing! 🙂
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Wow…Syeda, Ur words have a life that speaks 4m ur heart….Hugs and love to you as always my friend… 🤘
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Awww! Thank you soooo much Ajaz. I’m glad my words are liked by you and the others. Feels great!! Best wishes my dear friend!! 🙂
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Undoubtedly reminds me of ‘The road less travelled’ by Frost. But the theme of obviously different. Here, it’s about taking that first step! Loved the courageous ending 🙂
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Thank you Mana! It is one of my favourite poems. 🙂
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Hello, I read your blog daily. Your humoristic style is awesome,
keep it up!
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Thanks!
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