Don’t mess with a. . . bride!

He: Thanks for coming Susan at such a short notice.

She: What’s wrong Hugh? Why did you call me here?

He: Susan, I need to tell you something now.

She: *raising an eyebrow* Now??!!

He: *serious tone and face* Yes! Extremely serious!

She: Are you having some of those pre- kind of jitters?

He: No, no! *shaking his head* It’s not that! Listen to me Susan, carefully!

She: *worried face* Look at me. Tell me what it is!

He: *turning his face to her* I can’t do this!

She: *extremely shocked* What are you talking about Hugh?
           * stares at him and notices his expression* Oh! You’re really serious?

He: Yes Susan. I’m very sure! I don’t think I’m ready for it still!

She: Hmmmmmm! *a serious thoughtful face she makes*

Suddenly a devious smile spreads on her face.

She: *Thinking longer* Well what do I do now? I can’t let this dress and all arrangements go waste.

*fluttering eye lashes and pondering over* In that case, let me check on your best friend. What’s his name? Yeaaaaaah… Chris! I’m sure he’d be more than ready to take the vows with me.

He: *the suppressed smile escapes and a shock fills his face* What????

She: Yes, that’s perfect! I’ll ask him to marry me!

She collected the white laced folds of her bridal gown and ran on her heels! Shouting loudly…


She: Catch me if you can, Hugh. Or Chris wins the bride! You don’t mess with me on my wedding day!

With a new found energy he ran behind her. His plan to get her backfired. That’s what he loved in her. She was unpredictable. He knew what trouble he was getting into, when he’d stand at the aisle and say, “I do”!

P.S. Today I tried a “dialogue kind” post. Hope its good enough. If you don’t want me to torture you with such strange things in future, do tell me…. Else be prepared! 😂😂

Lots of love and best wishes!
Stay happy and blessed all.

22 thoughts on “Don’t mess with a. . . bride!

  1. Haha! You could never torture us, Syeda! ItΒ΄s always a pleasure to read your words πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thanks Sarah! Always the supportive friend! 😍😘


  2. Would love more of these…keep them coming!!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thanks Savio! I hope to do so!πŸ˜„πŸ˜„


  3. She surely couldn’t let that dress n arrangements go to waste…lol

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Absolutely! You know how much time and money goes in that! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰


    1. Thanks for reading and leaving such appreciative words!


      1. You are most welcome Syeda

        Liked by 1 person

  4. Something different from you. I liked it.
    That’s one hell of a bride threatening to run off with his friend 😐
    Good story though.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. She knew he was kidding and that’s the best threat to give, I feel! πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹
      Hahaha! Sometimes something different should be attempted, right? πŸ˜‰
      Thanks for your kind words, Lion! πŸ˜€

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Nice work Syeda! Something different πŸ˜„.

    Liked by 1 person

      1. πŸ˜€πŸ‘πŸΌ

        Liked by 1 person

  6. She’s art. You don’t have to understand her. She wasn’t built to validate your opinion accept her for beautiful ambiguity that she is.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Wow, didn’t expect that high drop at all!
    Another classic by you πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lol! Glad you liked it! Thanks! πŸ˜„

      Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this:
search previous next tag category expand menu location phone mail time cart zoom edit close